Saving the Villain from the Heroine

Manthika Nov 8, 2020

3

The main character read a book in her past life that told her everything that was going to happen.  So, to spare the life of a villain who has treated her kinda-nice as his maid, she takes the poison for him.  It pulls a Meitantei Conan on her and woop- now she's a child... and the guy's kind of a jerk (hello?  He's a villain?) and nothing really goes well for her, but the whole thing... is boring.  At least to me.  I'm not sure if its just how the author told the story, or the below average art, but I really couldn't get into it myself. 

YukinaZero Jul 10, 2021

3

None of this shit makes any scenes. I read 6 chapters and it was just one little thing after another driving me insane. Maybe this can just be written off as bad translation but the dialog was literal gibberish and it seems like no one can answer a straight question in this. There's a mountain of exposition in every chapter that makes the story both harder to follow and dull as watching paint dry. The ML is also nobility while the MC is just a maid so why is he babysitting this weird toddler-teen again!? And Why are 2 nobles that supposedly hate each other sitting around a table discussing important things while there is a child sleeping RIGHT THERE? You can't have it both ways people. Both a big house and limited rooms.  Last but not least is that stupid dinner scene! I don't know if this bother anyone else there were like 5 panels where the MC just dropped a bunch of stuff on the floor for shock value and NOTHING HAPPENED. She dropped a cup? It magically dissappeared before hitting the floor! She dropped a spoon? Oops, thats gone too!  And now the Grand Duke is suddenly getting married to a lowly maid??? How!? Why!? What is even happening!? Shut up with you lazy ass writing and come back to me when you can finish a full thought better the at least a dementia patient author-nim. 

ctrlist Oct 27, 2021

2

The story doesn't make sense like the other reviews said. However what bothered me the most is how the FL acts. She was a office worker?? in her past life so i'm gonna guess that she was a MINIMUM of 20 years old. In her new life, she lived until she was 17 years old (before she turned into a child). So let's just say she's 37+ years old.... but she acts like a 7 years old. I'm genuinely confused on why a grown ass woman is acting like a baby. Just because she turned into a child doesn't mean she mentally turned into a child as well. "I'll give yew a cookie because i lwike you" shut the hell up??? lmaoo