So just FYI, you can hit read more on a review to read the whole review, and not just the first paragraph that it appears your comment is based on. Because the issues you have in your comment is addressed in the review itself. You basically read a short overview, as indicated by the TLDR (Too long didn't read) at the start of the first paragraph and not the following three paragraphs that are a more detailed review explaining some issues I had with the story that included examples.
In case your curious it's usually better to put the tldr at the top because of how anime planet shows reviews, both as a few sentences on the main page, as well as for the fact you only get about a paragraph of space on the reviews page without the read more button. Also listing problems with a story isn't raging. Being disappointed in the story also isn't raging. Your tldr should be able to convey your stance quickly for people who don't want to read multiple paragraphs for whatever reason. That paragraph is 3 sentences. The first is praise of ch1-2. The second is the disappointment and the numerous overall issues I had with ch 3-6. The third is what i consider the two best ways to go about starting this story as well as my personal opinions on those choices.
Lol though he is a weapon i feel like he was completely useless as a mc the other main chatacters were way better then he was just imo i feel like he could have done more.
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So just FYI, you can hit read more on a review to read the whole review, and not just the first paragraph that it appears your comment is based on. Because the issues you have in your comment is addressed in the review itself. You basically read a short overview, as indicated by the TLDR (Too long didn't read) at the start of the first paragraph and not the following three paragraphs that are a more detailed review explaining some issues I had with the story that included examples.
In case your curious it's usually better to put the tldr at the top because of how anime planet shows reviews, both as a few sentences on the main page, as well as for the fact you only get about a paragraph of space on the reviews page without the read more button. Also listing problems with a story isn't raging. Being disappointed in the story also isn't raging. Your tldr should be able to convey your stance quickly for people who don't want to read multiple paragraphs for whatever reason. That paragraph is 3 sentences. The first is praise of ch1-2. The second is the disappointment and the numerous overall issues I had with ch 3-6. The third is what i consider the two best ways to go about starting this story as well as my personal opinions on those choices.
fair :p
Lol though he is a weapon i feel like he was completely useless as a mc the other main chatacters were way better then he was just imo i feel like he could have done more.
SPOILER
Wtf bro watch the WHOLE season...HE IS A GOD (THE STRONGEST). He distroyed a part of a huge country, heaven etc...even angels and gods fair him