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nachfuellbar

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Edit after Vol 15 at the End

The Story begins with the summoning of a hero

Too bad this hero doesn't possess any notable powers

And so begins the story of a hero who rebuilds a shabby kingdom 

Story progress is pretty good and really interesting but then it goes full harem which is kinda annoying - don't know why the author thought this is necessary, maybe because it's a stable in isekai but for me it destroys a really good story at least partially

Even though it is still interesting to read how the protagonist at first rebuilds the kingdom and then creates a alliance to fight back the demon army.

Edit after Volume 15:

The story gets more and more gaps without explanation - don't really think they can fix it AND keep it consistent.

I really expected something from the "magic are nanomachines" twist but it just introduces problems without an end

  1. how can the hero really be summoned? Either he is a copy and his origin world was more advanced than anything OR he is something like a construct of nanomachines with a more or less virtual personality - how wouldn't this lead to an existency crysis?
  2. when bacteria can "eat" the nanomachines, how are they robust enough to conjur that devastating effects in battle?
  3. the protagonist thinks about dragon transformations done by creating the huge body with nanomachines - why the fuck wouldn't you see the huge volumes of nanomachines condense or disperse???
  4. why would the imagination be needed to instruct the nanomachines to self defense? If the artifical intelligence of them is so low, they would be destroyed long before anything became remotely like described

There are many more things I could say about this but that would take too much space ;)

6/10 story
?/10 art
4/10 characters
6/10 overall

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