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nathandouglasdavis

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Avant-garde Yumeko

Jun 30, 2020

The synopsis made me feel that this would be interesting and the contents did not disappoint. It was riveting. Well, maybe "riveting" is too intense of a term, but it held my interest and I felt invested in the characters' actions. It was funny. Well, maybe "funny" is a bit too generous, but it was definitely amusing. Like when Yumeko is on the edge of feir seat eavesdropping on a classmate relate a sexual experience, hoping that fe'll describe feir boyfriend's penis. Or when fe gets all philosophical and asks "What is a cock?" Or just feir over-the-top obsession with penises in general. Fe goes to great lengths to see a real-life penis and it inspires fem to art.

The characters aren't drawn all that well, but I love the parts showing Yumeko's twinkling eyes and panting (in general, I think the emotions were conveyed well) as well as quite a few of feir drawings we can see in the background.

9/10 story
5/10 art
6/10 characters
8/10 overall
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