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Ayveh

  • Joined Apr 13, 2022
  • ? / F

God of Blackfield

May 27, 2022

The story idea was good, and it was good up until a certain point however due to some characters being the main characters allies, it made this turn into a trash story. 

What made me drop this is the annoying female characters. Women and Girl characters were poorly written!


For starters there is a 26 yr old who keeps hitting on him after he rejected her more than once. He told her he is a student (didn't say his age) but she said she didn't mind. Straight up Pedophile mentality & YES the MC is mentally 29 since he was reincarnated, but his body is a 19 year old in their senior yr of High School. She never asked his age when he told her he was in school so for all she could know he could be 16 & she said she straight up didn't mind.

This pedo keeps bugging him and being super seductive and flirty with him even though he eventually starts using her while ignoring her advances. It got to the point where I just had to drop it, especially after they decided to add a guy that the MC becomes sorta allies with, that guy had attempted to rape a girl when he was serving in the army.

Makes me wonder how many more pedos and rapist the  author is going to add & make them be the "good guys" & main character allies. 

Lastly there was a high school girl who kept stalking the MC after he told her to stay out of his way, yet she kept stalking him and trying to get close to him. She was a bully and hung out with other (evil) bullies, thus me hating her character and finding her existance in the story annoying and pointless. She literally adds nothing to the story so not sure why the author decided to continue having her stalk the MC. It's like the Author SUCKS at writing female characters. 

2/10 story
7/10 art
2/10 characters
2/10 overall

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