135dragon

(20 chapters in then dropped)

Read this if you want: 

• A premise similar to Log Horizon with an OP Summoner MC being reincarnated into a world with a group of other players
• A light hearted but incredibly rushed story
• Ecchi characters 'reacting' to the MC's little girl form. 

 The tone of the story is lighthearted with a bit of mystery, which would normally be great and all but the story drops you in the middle of nowhere and expects you to follow along. We don't know anything about the world, there is no world building, we don't know anything about any of the characters or their motivations (including the MC's). Immediately on being reborn into this video game world, the MC is whisked away on a plot with little to no rationale. From community discussions, it seems like the manga skipped out on way too many details present in the original source, but I wouldn't know since I haven't read it. Because of this lack of details, the story feels highly rushed and without a focus.

Ignoring the rushed premise, the story feels unrealistic to an uncanny degree. The actions of the characters don't make sense based on the world the story is set in. Any more would be spoilerific, but just be warned. Ignoring these two faults, the story is okay and can easily be shaped into a great story. 

I usually don't critique art, but perhaps because I was annoyed by the story I couldn't help but critique the art. The character's reactions are lacking, focusing on the MC's (who is a 12 year old child) panties is just gross, and there is a noticable lack of detail on things which for all right should be detailed. At times, its hard to tell which character is which (especially since the story was rushed) since they share the same basic traits. 

The supporting cast don't get much characterization. The ones which do seem shallow and overwhelmingly without debt. A lot of characters seem to have the same personality befitting their category of NPC's which is unfortunate. The MC herself is seemingly average, but her actions don't seem to make sense.