The Villainess and Miss Demon Lord

Kingsapphic Oct 30, 2023

3

I really wanted to like this. But the story is a mess none of it makes sense. It's extremely stupid like the author is not thinking about the plot or anything being plausible AT ALL. The main characters are painstakingly stupid and once, idk if it's due to the translation or if the author really doesn't care at all, but the mc tells one of the characters "hey you have to like this person bc of the story." Uh huh? Aren't they supposed to be isekied? How would the characters even know what the mc is talking about? The exchange is for a couple of panels so i think it's more the author lazy writing than a translation error but so knows either way it's stupid and alot of stupid things happen like that i literally rolled my eyes so many times. I just couldn't read it anymore and I really tried. I wanted to like this so much bc it had 2 iseki at the sametime and it's yuri so i thought it would be interesting. Instead its so dumb it couldn't get anymore dumb if the author sat down and thought hey how can i make this story even more dumb and less believable? And maybe that's exactly what they did. The art is good but it's the same generic art that you see in every single isekai manwha. If there wasn't like a hundred million isekai manwha I would think the same person is drawing them all including this one. But i think that's impossible so I give the art an 8. 

Jossu566 Mar 30, 2024

5

No spoiler review, just opinions on the general plot and such: I wanted to enjoy this, but the writing is just too simple and bad for me to do anything but look at it like a picture book. I started skipping the dialogue pretty early on. I went through all available chapter in one day, and I felt like instead of reading 60 chapters I read 20. So many chapters but hardly anything interesting happened. Sometimes a story gets me hooked with good writing in 10 or so chapters, but this still feels like its in the beginning of the story, but I guess they finally figured it out. I think I'll continue looking and the art only just to see their relationship develop, because the premise in the beginning was interesting enough. I also wanna make it clear, that I am a lesbian myself, and that my harsh review isnt effected by the fact that this is a GL, its just bad writing.

Enderpwny Mar 2, 2024

8

I am not great at relaying my thoughts in writing, but I felt like this story deserves a positive review. also minor spoilers from the early chapters of the book. Also for the same reasons, some of this was writen assisted by ai it is all my own thoughts just reworded to be more clear or understandable so if the tone seems to shift that might be why. A fully spoiler free review: It is a sweet Isekai magic school yuri romance with a unique version of the "enemies to lovers" trope. I really like it but I can see why people wouldn't. A loveable goof protagonist and Tsundere love intrest. A mostly spoiler free reveiw: This story is an isekai story which might turn some people away from it but i think it handles the isekai quite well as it is a pretty major piece of the story, as certain parts definitely couldn't have the same impact if it wasn't. It takes place inside the world of a book the main character has read after her and her best friend die in an accident and both are reborn in this new world without realizing the other has as well. They both work toward slightly different objectives: the main character, who is reincarnated as the villainess, has read the books and just desires to make it out alive, using her knowledge from reading the book. The main character's best friend is reincarnated into the vessel of a defeated "demon lord" whose goal is to be successful and powerful without giving anything away. It is a delightful blend of romance, fantasy, and comedy. The story follows the misadventures of our lovable protagonist, focusing on the dynamic between the main character, a clumsy noble with no magical prowess, and the studious, magic-savvy twice reincarnated demon lord and ex-best friend, creating an engaging contrast. As they navigate the challenges of their magical school, fueled by their differing backgrounds and personalities, you will be treated to a heartwarming tale of friendship, romance, and self-discovery. The story also lightly touches on themes of stereotype, socioeconomic class divide, and loss. However the story is quite trope heavy though it mainly seeks to undermine these tropes or show them in the light of a yuri manga. The story also isn't that deep and is much more akin to a dessert than a full course meal.