Shh, You'll Wake up the Child

chellmasterfunk Jun 6, 2021

7

This had so much potential, but the plot was so rushed that it was confusing. It started off on a high note then it just dropped the ball. The storyline itself would've been great if executed properly. (SPOILERS AHEAD) The story was based on the love that develops between a babysitter and the dad... the dad had various issues but it never gave a real backstory as to why he was the way he was. Then they throw in a side character who I guess was suppose to be a bad guy, but turns out he was just an overprotective brother. The MC made it seem like he was some evil guy who gets people killed, but that wasn't the case, and since there was no backstory to why he thought that, it just seemed like unnecessary drama. They randomly threw in another piece of unnecessary drama in the end and resolved it by the next chapter which made no sense. It felt like the author was rushing and had a limited amount of chapters he/she could put out, so he took all the ideas he had and threw them into a manga regardless of it making sense to the readers.  Honestly, the artwork was nice, the characters were nice, but just because the story felt rushed and confusing I didn't really like it. I guess if you bored and want something simple with smut scenes then this is for you.