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Iyashi

  • Joined Sep 9, 2021
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Where is the comedy tag? It's full of it, tho?..

There are far too many ridiculous restrictions on her for the sake of "comedy". It was funny at first, but now it's like half of the plot is about her ridiculously extreme weakness and the aftermath of it and simply delays the story without adding anything more to it.

Because of it, even after 20 chapters you still know almost nothing about her or the rest of the main and side characters or the world.

But, next to all that comedial drama 'bout her weakness, there is a little bit of background information and it's slowly opening a path for a story.

6/10 story
?/10 art
5/10 characters
6/10 overall

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