AzriellaVeRaon

Once you start reading this story you will not be able to stop till the end.  While it can be a bit confusing at times, and the characters can be a bit frustrating, the Mansion will grip you tight and not let you go.

In the beginning, and a little bit throughout the middle of the story, I deffinetly found myself asking why there was so little comunication between the characters, and the spooks were rather minor, though still chilling.  But as I went on, the lack of comuinication started to make sense, and the mystery of it all really was great.

The only issue I have with this story is a rather minor one; and that would be the ending.  I've never been a fan of endings like this as they always feel like a bit of a cop out, but in this storys case, while I was dissapointed, it did work.  And the last part of then ending, just... I would LOVE a follow up story with those two characters spending time with eachother.