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zuzzmaster

  • Joined Nov 7, 2021
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This isn't really a review, but someone should check the synopsis and fix it. First of all you should put a space between a period and the next letter like they did for the comma (magic. Cain... instead of magic.Cain). Second of all, the sentence "Cain grew up being surrounded by Gods who doesn’t know self-esteem, the upper noble and the girls who are swayed around him." is wrong. It should be surrounded by Gods who don't know self-esteem (gods with an S calls for plural while doesn't is singular), the upper noble makes no sense, "the" while not used in plural (the upper nobleS) makes it sound like there is only one upper noble, which would suprise me. While this may not matter in the end, I personally find this a turnoff to actually read this LN but also very distracting. 

?/10 story
?/10 art
?/10 characters
5/10 overall
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