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upsidepenguin

  • Joined Aug 29, 2019
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I was going to give this a 10 because it's one of those rare smuts with consent, decent ML and FL, communication, and hot drawings. But then came chapter 4! What the heck, ML? Spoiler ahead...

ML was really cute and respectful, but then author had to write a scene where FL falls asleep after taking care of him when he got sick. Then ML gets horny. And shoves his dick into her WHILE she's sleeping??? Where is the consent??? 

But I'm not low-rating this into oblivion because it's still better than most smuts. Dang it, is there any smut with consistent consent and level-headed characters? I mean, there is one called "Talk to me", but in the whole industry, just one!? There are hopefully more that I just haven't discovered yet, but I'm tired of the crappy tropes and lack of consent in smut stories.

7/10 story
10/10 art
7/10 characters
7/10 overall

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Fiollee Sep 23, 2023

You should try "Shojo Kon ~Kohinata Fuufu Wa Shite Mitai~" it's the cutest consensual smut ever