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nathandouglasdavis

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Under the Moonlight

Oct 27, 2021

A blend of comedy, action, and smut. Ayla is a mischievous, whimsical, and hedonistic vampire with droopy elven ears and huge doe eyes. Kenneth is a human with a tragic backstory, a scarred body, and a bulgingly muscular chest. Sheldon is a butler.

As Kenneth's father, I can't give my blessing to this union with Ayla, to this romance, because it seems steeped in toxicity and dysfunction. I mean, it started with a rape for gods' sakes, which then transitioned into Ayla trying to gaslight Kenneth and act as though fe was the one who had initiated the sex (despite Kenneth being literally unconscious when it began), which then was soon followed by controlling and objectifying verbage on Ayla's part. No, as Kenneth's father, I hope that fe can find a better partner--one who will accept the fact that fe uses dark mana without judgment and, as a general rule of thumb, without raping fem. 

3/10 story
7/10 art
5/10 characters
4/10 overall
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