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nathandouglasdavis

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Honto no Kokoro

Apr 22, 2021

The teacher with molest-y inner thoughts--Nakamura. The student who just appreciates having someone who cares for fem and doesn't seem to want fem to be less "gloomy" like other people do--Oono. And, most recently, the exuberant student who says exactly what's on feir mind and likes taking pictures of animals--Kobayashi. I appreciate these characters, and the ways they've interacted with each other so far have been interesting enough. The hook of the story is that Oono has the ability to read peoples' minds, and fe is a bit disturbed by how Nakamura has thoughts of licking fem and stuff, but fe also seems somewhat okay with it.

The chibi forms have large ears and flattened, football heads. The proportions and angling, most notably with the eyes, is sometimes off and can be a distraction. The highlighting on the hair looks kinda weird. There's some graininess to the shading. It has simplistic to nonexistent backgrounds. Overall, the art is more bad than good, but most of that has to do with awkwardness in the faces.

[Reviewed at chapter 13]

4/10 story
2/10 art
6/10 characters
5/10 overall
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