nathandouglasdavis

I definitely enjoyed this. A negative one hundred dollar bounty is just too ridiculous, so Petey asks the Mystery Solver Suna to help fem figure out why they would put up such a wanted poster. I liked it 'cause the deductions all just happened in the bar by talking it through, using the process of elimination. It's like seeing somebody work through a logic puzzle, which doesn't necessarily sound entertaining, but I was entertained. Mainly 'cause of Suna. Petey was an okay character and I feel like I should be a lot more drawn to fem because of how expressive and stuff fe is (especially compared to Suna), but honestly I just saw fem as there to make Suna shine. I might even be interested in more stories about Suna's Mystery Solver business and how that differs from a detective agency. But maybe not. It probably works better as a standalone story.