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nathandouglasdavis

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The artwork is colored, but the characters are stiff and awkwardly drawn. The backgrounds are also usually blurry and seem to be copy-and-pasted images (which I don't personally care for).

The story has had a few shifts. The first section (ch. 1-11) introduces the core dynamic of the slave master fearing that if fe doesn't humiliate and demean feir slave (and thus satisfy feir slave's masochism) that feir slave will kill fem. The second section (ch. 12-18) explores the way that witches fit within this world, shows the slave in a non-slave role, and has Teolard drink a potion that turns fem into a possessive prick. And then the third section (ch. 19-present) has Teolard actually fuck the slave girl and introduces a new dynamic--where the slave isn't just allowing femself to get dominated, but instead legitimately gets dominated through the sexual pleasure which Teolard brings fem.

More than the sexuality, the humor of this series is what has kept me reading it. Seeing a non-sadist attempting to be sadistic and trying to navigate mistakes or going too far with faux confidence is pretty funny.

[Reviewed at chapter 28]

3/10 story
1/10 art
3/10 characters
3/10 overall
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