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nachfuellbar

  • Joined Dec 22, 2018
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A well written story which sadly lacks some originality.

It's basically a standard small fry will become the strongest and conquers the world story. The other characters lack a certain depth and his opponents seem lacking in education despite being full fledged lords in contrast to him being a second son  of a concubine who wasn't recognized from his family (which would normally cause lack of education etc)

In a isekai story you could explain something like this with previous world knowledge but that's not the case because his skill only ever helps with knowledge after he himself had similar ideas.

?/10 story
?/10 art
?/10 characters
6/10 overall

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