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  • india
  • Joined Oct 4, 2018
  • 25 / M

The Undefeated Newbie

Nov 18, 2021

  The story is like pieces taken from multiple chinese,japanese and korean mangas , overall the the story comes to barely below average. 

   the art is one of the worst i have ever seen , the artist could have done a huge improvement if he had used his skills properlly, to start with effective use of space provided instead of using fixed boxes for overall page style.

There are places he could have focused on natual positioning of charecter body than focusing on the sexyness he is trying to show.(THE ARTIST AND EDITORS FAILED BIG TIME [F])

   the MC inteligence is like in 20's which usually happens in japanese stories due to their writing and cultural style, As i said before.... the story is like mixing multiple other novels.

2/10 story
1/10 art
2/10 characters
0.5/10 overall
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