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Slave B

Oct 3, 2021

This webtoon started out as amazing great pacing mc had attitude and I could dig his determination and resolve due to his backstory. After 40 or so chapters the author started drinking while writing and threw the romance and story flow out the fucking window. Made the romance super complicated for no reason and ruined it when it could have been simple. The story became super scuffed by the author throwing in the war arc early enough even though they were just done in the academy where they learned minimal combat skills. For some reason they gave the asshole that was passed the point of no return a shitty redemption arc I guess because they had to hook up the girl mc didn't end up with with him. And last 20 chapters were fucking stupid, where the author just severed every lasting part by rushing them. Mc becomes God for a bit kills the enemy and they just end it. Rushed ending, character development was Deleted and finally they just do nothing. The main character ends the series by working on a farm. 

I may have gotten a few things wrong I skipped some chapters because they either made no sense or we're boring as fuck. All in all this we toon is good at first then it gets brain cancer that's terminal halfway.

4/10 story
5/10 art
1/10 characters
3/10 overall

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Marc26 Nov 21, 2021

Despite for me, the overall and the characters rating are too low, your comment is one of the few sensible critical/negative comments