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YukinaZero

  • United states
  • Joined Aug 15, 2015
  • ? / F

The Villainous Violet

Jul 6, 2020

The storyline is kind of a mess. Everything is very rushed and forced. I read 16 chapters and in that time there wasn't a single moment spared to pause and explain a characters mindset very well or show someone following a well developed line of reasoning. The characters all felt really basic... except for Aaron. Pure favoritism on my part but I loved Aaron. He was so sweet and the only reason I read more then 3 chapters of this chaotic story. 

While the art is very pretty... eyelashes. All I have to say about my bad rating is eyelashes. It unnerved the hell out of me. 😨

1/10 story
1/10 art
5/10 characters
3/10 overall

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