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RedHornet

  • Joined Oct 12, 2020
  • 23 / F

I think it's supposed to be a spoof but even then it misses all the comedic punchlines hard with their awful delivery.

Like when a few chapters in and the "doting" father ends up breaking all the bones of the newborn MC and so she is put under 3 years of sleep. This was put in as something funny but I don't know who will think that as funny. I feel like they should have put a tag for child abuse instead. Almost killing your child is not funny.

3/10 story
4/10 art
4/10 characters
4/10 overall

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