Ravenreviews

A few things to note, unless you are a writer and/or an actor you will not be able to understand how someone wrote this. If you don't understand allusion it will be hard to understand the storyline and ending.   

Rating’s if you don’t want slight spoilers 

Deliverance of story 8.5/10

Storyline 7.5/10

Characters Overall 5.7/10 

Overall Rating 7.2/10 

Possibility of small Spoiler below⤵️   

Moving on, overall I feel like the deliverance of the story was an 8.5/10 I didn't give it a 10/10 because of the hard-to-read moments, which could be because of translation errors. Even though it had these errors it wasn't hard to decipher. 

I would give the storyline a 7.5/10 because of the true horror it brings (docked points for r*pe scenes but it, unfortunately, makes it more realistic). I gave this a higher ranking than expecting because it is terrifyingly realistic. It makes you sick to your stomach because this can happen in real life. Yes, some scenes are more on the unrealistic side, yet the realism in the rest of the manhwa overshadows it.

I would give the characters an overall score of 5.7/10 I felt as if they needed more to them, specifically Hayan. If it was a 45+ Chapter story we could have seen more development and more of each character’s backstory like Hoyeon.  

Finally, I feel as if there needs to be an explanation for why a psychological exam, presumably, wasn't done on any of them and why they were sent to jail.  There also needs to be a further explanation regarding why Gyuh-Wool wanted to hold his pee in at the beginning of the story (I thought it was a kink at first yet he is disgusted by Jinyoo’s pee later on). 

I would give it a 2.5/10 if we consider it to be yaoi alone, yet it is not, it is a psychological thriller, which is meant to make you sick to your stomach and terrified. So, with all of the factors previously listed taken into account, I would give this manhwa a 7.2/10.