RavenousGopher's avatar


  • Idk I'm probably lost
  • Joined Jul 11, 2020
  • 22 / M

This story has an extremly interesting premise, but the execusion is absolutly shit. The main character is a basic edgelord who grows stronger with negative emotions, but despite that he goes around with an annoying FM who's not intersting or compelling in any manner, shape, or form. Not only that, but his ability is just obnoxious. Instead of having an interesting fight with his enemies where he display's hispower in the name of his revenge, he just walks over to them and they instantly die. It's probably one of the least promising revenge stories I've ever seen and while it may be a good power trip and have some nice art, I can't really think of any reason to read it.

5/10 story
8/10 art
2/10 characters
4/10 overall

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