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Pilzsowiso

  • Joined Jan 20, 2020
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Intresting Setting, exactly the type of story I was looking for.

Its about a chinese university student who stumbles upon a magic devices that lets him create his own world. We can follow him on his journey of developing himself and everything around him.

The novel had a few very good moments and it had a lot of intresting aspects but sadly it was handled very poorly and the ending was very rushed. You could see how the author lost his intrest in continueing the novel.

Couldve been way better. But if you like the Immortal and creator setting you might end up enjoying it.

Pro:

  • Creating own world
  • Exploring and understanding the world
  • A lot of POVs from the inhibitants of the created world

Contra:

  • It felt very rushed, especially the ending
  • Certain plots, characters and story arcs werent fully build out
  • Slow and a little bit confusing start
6/10 story
?/10 art
5/10 characters
6/10 overall
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