Thousand Sword Techniques
Jul 8, 2022Too much disruptive humor, it gets in the way all the time, ruins the art-style every other panel, throws sense out of the window to be funny, spoils serious moments and makes it hard to take the story as anything other than as a joke. It was funny the first 3 chapters, and sure, there are a few funny moments here and there but it's mostly just annoying, the artist/author could have managed the same thing while taking the story seriously if it wasn't so "in your face".
Story is nothing new, but it's interesting enough, similar to "Star Instructor, Master Baek" setting wise. Regardless, I recommend that one over this one any time.
Characters... can't say since you can't take them seriously (mostly), the sister and her bodyguard are cool but they are not even secondary chars. The MC is annoying and dumb for someone who has lived one life already, at least he's not rotten, even if he's unruly but then again, he's not interesting enough to carry the story imo.
Since the humor is engrained into the story to such an extent I doubt it'll change in the future so I doubt it will get any better. So unless you like that kind of comedic storytelling it might be a better idea to look elsewhere.
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The humar is litrally what makes tis story fire and saying nothing new for a story that you can hardly see any of at all shows how little you have actually read. After reading over 600 serieses its probably the second time i see a fat mc who actually has to deal with losing weight, loose skin and actually working hard not magically have abs etc.
I challenge you to name 5 similar to this where an mc reincanates into a fat guy and actually has to work his butt of to lsoe weight and actually has to deal wityh real life consquences like loose skin etc, as a fat guy myself in process of losing weight everythign so far in story has been facts and an encouragment.