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NanaMimi

  • Joined Aug 10, 2019
  • 19 / F

Ordinary Men

Aug 10, 2019

Has potential, but does nothing with it.

The characters are very loveable and the first half of the story is nice. The comedy hits the right points. You quickly grow attached to the main couple, but after they get together, the author throws in forced drama and the focus is shifted from the development of the main character's romantic relationship to... all the bad things the antagonist does. The drama is just really sudden and unnecessary. The conclusion is also an abrupt jump from the drama to an epilogue.

?/10 story
?/10 art
?/10 characters
7/10 overall
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