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MrMirza

  • Iran
  • Joined Mar 28, 2020
  • 37 / M

Rebuild World

Oct 28, 2020

story is developing in a good way. there was some lame stereotype ecchi trick which I hope doesn't repeat. If the author instead of trying to put his efforts on making boobs bigger, puts his efforts on the story, sure it will not loose its quality.

Every reaction must be according to an action. with that the chain of a strong story will be formed. ch. 13 had mistakes. hope it doesn't go on

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Update: the story got more childish, things comming out of blue, why ? bcuz the autor is tring to shift everything toward his/her preferences without taking in count the whole picture until here. I decreased my given rate and dropped it.

P.S. if u r interested in action and u enjoy shounen u probably enjoy it.

6/10 story
7/10 art
6/10 characters
5/10 overall

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acube3760 May 12, 2021

oh my......u have a gud point there