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  • Noneya Beezwax
  • Joined Jan 11, 2019
  • ? / F

Loads of potential, downgraded by mediocre and unrefined art, lowbrow humor, and no hook or attachment the the main characters. 

The art is rough, blocky, and in some places just lazy, thought it's not the worst I've ever seen.  The plot is shallow, if it exists, and it has no 'hold' on the reader, just full of cliches.  The one original part of the entire thing is seemingly shoved to the side instead of capitalized on, and you get POV switches instead of side-by-sides of what 'they' is thinking.  (Is, not are, because hive mind... again, a cool concept.  Just not done well here.) 

And I was honestly just turned off of the entire thing when the girl body peed herself though I kept reading a while after that- it didn't get much better.

2/10 story
4/10 art
2/10 characters
3/10 overall
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