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I loved the setup, the characters and the world. But 6 chapters was just waay too rushed. This could've benefitted from a much longer pagecount.
I found the ending sad and quick, with the alpha pretty much being neutered and despite the omagea's conclusion regarding acceptance, it felt ro me like the alpha had to give up a crucial part of himself.
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