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  • Joined May 15, 2020
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Well it was good read. The plot in the first half was better than the second half. it was depressing true but it was so interesting that it actually made me want to read the next chapter then the second half was kinda slow and also i really got annoyed with the seme in the second half i was so happy with uke's personality he was really a interesting and fun character but in the second half of the story that interesting independent and cool character of him got changed and became boring ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍ i don't like the fact that he began to depends on seme so much and the seme was clearly very selfish and way too pushy so i felt like their relationship is not healthy i donna but it really bugs me ( i was already annoyed and kinda a pissed off with the seme in the first half of the story too coz after they had sex for the first time the seme forced himself again on uke even tho uke was clearly exhausted and refused it many times but without considering his feelings seme had his way with him!? he didn't even care like WHAT THE FUCK BRO? that was actually the problem with the seme he dosen't care about uke's feelings emotions he just wanna have uke for his selfish reasons Σ(っ°Д °;)っ ) the second couple was kinda of interesting but their sex scean was kinda forced if they had some more time to develop and surtout their feelings for each other without forcing some sex scean it would have been better.. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

8/10 story
10/10 art
8/10 characters
7/10 overall

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