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Florentiniuks

  • Joined Mar 15, 2020
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A Fine Line

Dec 6, 2020

It sucked. It sucked so much. Just a piece of crap. Storyline? What storyline? Characters, don't even get me started on that one.

Abusive poorly developed relationship turns into somewhat 'romantic' relationship despite the fact that it's still abusive was never changed.

Charatcers in a nutshell: anger issues x a pushover with no personality, then there's a side character who's aware that he's a side character, and then there's the love interest #2 which is obviously 'doomed for the sad end' from the very start.

If the weak-no-personality-except-being-a-pushover guy would've ended up with the possible love interest #2 the story would've been at least bearable to finish. But it was so obvious from the start that it was even stupid.

Whole character development happened in 5 seconds, and it's just so bad.

Might sound too rude, but dang I want to take back the time I spent reading this. Even the art wasn't too good at points.

1/10 story
4/10 art
1/10 characters
2/10 overall

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