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Ermory

  • Joined Aug 6, 2019
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Ok so first of all. I think the story is very good I enjoyed it very much. The art style is amazing and the characters seem very well written.

My only problem is the romance. Specifically one single romance plot. For the rest is amazing so if you don't mind it's a very good story.

SPOILERS AHEAD BE AWARE 

AGAIN SPOILERS

TW// Grooming

I do not like how the author is going for the female lead to fall in love with the guard that practically saw her grow up from when she was young. I would have understood if it was onesided. I would have understood if the guard started guarding her after she turned 17.

But the dude saw her grow up from when she was 6 and develops feelings for her...

That makes me very uncomfortable because it feels like grooming and I absolutely hate that. This dude saw the woman grow up from when she was a child, she is still a child in his head (it is shown in an illusion) but still, he blushes around her and acts jealous ( now that I look for it, it kinda happened when she was a child too) and that makes it seem like he is a pedophile and started grooming her. That is not something I like at all.

Like the dude full on blushed when she was a child too...

So from the moment I saw the panel where he blushed by just touching her hands and her going back to bed thinking she wanted to touch him more... I decided to drop it.  

To be honest, that's the only reason, so if anybody can go on with that it's a wonderful story to read.

6/10 story
10/10 art
8/10 characters
7/10 overall

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Valkuna Nov 6, 2020

Omg thanks to ur comment I know who she is going to end up with. You saved me hours of reading this... after I already read it for many hours, but thanksssss!