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CinnamonCakes

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Crazy Like a Fox

Apr 13, 2022

Wouldn't recommend I tried sticking it out to read all of it but its not what i thought it would be based on the plot summery and title.

The FL's whole thing is pretending to be crazy and having a 2nd chance at life so why in ch 1 did the autoher gloss over the MC going through the motions of conviencing ppl she was crazy in her 2nd life?

Like you make the MC wake up at the age of 10 for basically no reason bc you decided to time skip 9 years anyways. At that point if the creator really wanted to skip to the poorlly written meeting between the FL and ML they should have just made the assaionation attempt a failure then have the MC pretend to have gone crazy from the poison.

Beacuse again her living a second life serves no purpose, and would have been better narratively without it.

Also the FL is being written as cautious in one panel but in the next she kisses ML at their first meeting? 

It seems like the author had a vague idea of what they wanted for a plot but didnt know how to write it.

4/10 story
5/10 art
1/10 characters
3/10 overall

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