Yellow Drops

nathandouglasdavis Aug 15, 2020

3

So, there are two ways we can talk about this. We can talk about this as pornography or we can talk about this as a story. As a story, it's completely worthless. It consists of an extended sex scene on a couch, from foreplay to climax, broken up twice with flashbacks to when Hiyoko and Sato had first become friends. It didn't do an effective job of making it clear that a flashback was starting with the first flashback, so I ended up a bit confused until I realized the narrative had gone back in time. The story of how they became friends isn't interesting. Now, if we judge it as pornography, the sex scene is choreographed brilliantly. It draws you in and makes you feel the character's pleasure. The body curves and contortions are drawn beautifully. My only real complaint about the art is that the eyes can sometimes feel a bit off. But the flashbacks feel entirely unneeded from a pornographic point of view. Personally, I tend to focus more on the story than the smut, so I've rated it lower on the scale because of that. But if the sex scene wasn't as good as it was, I probably would've rated it as a 1/10.