Those girls aren't family! They're gold diggers! I'm not gonna let them mess with me.
Source: Toomics
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It's a pretty good story. The MC was annoying at times but not really to the point where it makes the story unreadable. The ending was wholesome but I think they should have added 2-3 chapters at the end so we can see what happens after. But overall a good story.
There are a few stages to the sexual activity: awkward waffling and game-playing (ch. 1-20), brazenly using them (ch. 21-39), trying to be more emotionally sensitive (ch. 40-70). It starts out with Jay trying to uncover whether these three girls (Blake, Ruby, and Becky) are gold-diggers, and it eventually turns into Jay reflecting about how fe has failed to be self-reliant and serious in feir own actions. Jay also has a girlfriend, Jules, who is even more of a gold-digger than the other girls. And rather than chasing money (i.e. "gold"), all the girls around Jay sorta end up chasing feir thick cock. Though the three girls end up also developing emotional connections with Jay. I like how there seems to be a variety with the sex positions. And some of the games and scenarios that lead to sex are pretty enticing; it's nice that it doesn't just (purely) have the characters just fuck with no lead-up. Even when the girls are wearing bras (which isn't always), you can still see the shape of their nipples through their shirts. Obviously, the main reason to read this manga is the sex scenes, but there's also a character arc that Jay goes through where fe eventually matures and learns to stop relying on feir father's money and to instead be more self-reliant. It's not the greatest story or anything, but it has a solid enough trajectory with an ending that makes a certain amount of sense considering everything that led up to it.
Pornwhas dont need to have insanely complicicaded story but usually they try to have it. They take way too much more then they can write within the amount of chapters they have they usually rushed and they dont care aboutcahracters but this one isnt like this(mostly). Story here is simple MC gets to live with 3 golddiggers that are after his father and at the end he ends up with them. Even though story is simple all of the small parts of it are done right and autor took his/her time with them so its easy for reader to get into it. Characters are done nicely (not just theire look). Sadly i had one problem and that is MC he is just an idiot other then that its all good. Art is little different from most pornwhas but i liked it is more cartoony. Now to the bad part of this and thats last 10 chapters holy idk why but it just didnt fit there at all and it ruind whole reading for me i wanned to give it 10/10 but sadly last couple chapters didnt fit in what was build up until now in the story.
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