Sweet Dream - Part 2

Claaarize Sep 19, 2021

8

Definitely better than season 1 but the author should've just removed the succubus part of the plot. It has been completely ignored til the end of the story anyway. It would've been so much better without it since it didn't really add anything to the plot. In fact, it just made everything seemed unresolved since it hasn't been brought up til the end.  Anyway, the adorable ML saved this. I'm a sucker for shy but dependable guys so he made this worth reading. 

ReaperRiceCake Sep 30, 2022

8

A completely different story (part 1 is about an incubus and part 2 about a succubus). I will say, I dislike the fact FL looks like a dude and also is a VERY WEAK succubus (and is a little romanticaly dumb, she is a succubus, what the F...), I had a hard time to read this right after part 1 (powerful and confident incubus, who uses perfectly his supernatural powers...). If they had the same gender, or if I have read part 2 independently, or a long time after/before part 1, I wouldn't have this bitter feeling female gender are always described as weak and always lose the lead...Whatever, it doesn't impact my rating. Soreness aside, this story is good (succubus thing is almost optional), not rushed, has a sligh psychological side, more dept than part 1. MC struggle then manage to communicate properly. Less seggs than part 1, but still hot.