A boy walks his dog through a city of robots, but then something terrible happens...
Chapter 1 of Amedeo Ryokouki.
This story is eight-and-a-half pages long and is largely dependent on the series of unexpected events and twists that take place one after the other. Without giving any spoilers away, all I can say is that the title "Odorless" makes a lot of sense. It's a tragic story. Impressively well-written for how short it is. I honestly can't think of anything I would add, except for maybe extending the initial playing scene and including more details on how they bonded. The artwork is simplistic and cutesy. There's a lot of whites and light grays. The smile on the shadow was creepy, and I assume that was intended to help reflect the dog's perspective.
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