I think this story is good in some ways, and lacking in others. While the story is cute, and there certaily is an arc to it, some of the characters fall flat. Overall though, if you're looking for a cute, short story that meets most of the highlights of an omegaverse yaoi, then this is worth a read.
The main character, Tetsuji, has a fair amount of background and character development, but I do feel like we could see more of his past. The main issue is the love interest uke, Kaneda. While we get some short glimpses into his past, and some general idea of his personality, overall, he's a one-dimensional character. The only thing we know he likes is the main character, and that he has trouble standing up for himself. Nothing wrong with those two things, but it falls short of knowing his asperations, his fears, his hobbies, or anything else. Furthermore, there's not much of a character arc with him either. I feel like we know more about the side character Julian than we do Kaneda.
Art is so pretty enough with the two boys but story was a little too flat. Still good enough read tho!