Cigarette

Emy95 Jan 4, 2022

6.5

[NO SPOILERS!]  It's a cute story about the ML trying to close the distance with the MC as time goes by and one of those ways was through smoking, it was like a recurring center piece, the author did a lovely job with that even though I'm very much against smoking lol. Now, I understand it's just two chapters, but there were too many time jumps, not to mention unmarked, making me feel a bit detached from the story in addition to skipping pivotal moments that precisely makes romantic comics so endearing. There is also a lack of elaboration in some things like why the ML likes the protagonist in the first place? It was never answered and personally I missed it. It's a nice comic, but not fully fleshed out.

overflown Aug 10, 2022

7.5

Rushed, and we didn't get to delve into the characters, but there's only so much that you can do in two chapters. You don't really get to see the process of them falling for each other in this one (again, only so much that you can do in two chapters), but nevertheless I quite enjoyed this one. It has quite an interesting setup and usage of cigarettes as the recurrent theme, and it's messy and not wholesome (I personally don't find it really cute, as well) and that's how it's intended to be, I think. The art is awesome.

Curiousmadra Jun 20, 2022

6

Ngl y'all, this BL feels forced like I wouldn't want someone to force themselves on top of me behind my partners back!