Akazukin Eliza

One Shot
2009
2.781 out of 5 from 360 votes
Rank #33,022
Akazukin Eliza

Eliza is a girl with many suitors – though her disturbingly-muscular grandmother always seems to stand in their way. However, one day, a boy named Wolf crosses her path. He’s interested in her too, but will he be able to get past the barriers that stand before his would-be love interest?

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nathandouglasdavis
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I can just imagine the thought process that lead to some of these decisions: Ok! So we need to have semi-erotic fight scenes with a giant penis, but we can't have it be an actual penis. This isn't a hentai after all. So what's the most penile creature imaginable? Of course! A giant worm with throbbing veins! Perfect! We also need a full-on nude scene. But why would a girl be naked in the middle of the woods? Let's just say fe got sweaty and, having no sense of self-control, started to bathe on the spot. But wouldn't it be ridiculous to bathe in front of a boy fe just met? Just say that the boy's passed out or something. But how can we make the nudity last longer than a paltry bathing scene? We could have the penis-worm eat feir clothes, then the nudity can be prolonged until the end of the manga. Problem solved! And finally we need some sort of resolution to make it feel like an actual story. We could have the grandma be cured of feir aggressiveness toward suitors and accept Wolf and Eliza being together. But why would fe have a sudden change of heart like that? Just say that feir aggressiveness was a side effect of drug use. Then how did the drugs leave feir system? What if the worm can extract all harmful substances from peoples' bodies. In other words, it can eat poisons. The penis-worm truly is the answer to all of life's problems! We can also use this as the reason for why it ate Eliza's clothes--because they had poison spilled on them--and for why Wolf was passed out by the lake--because fe had ingested poison! But why would they have come in contact with poison? Just have Eliza's food basket include poisonous mushrooms. Wait, wouldn't it be easier to have them run into poisonous mushrooms out in the wild? Whatever. Obviously, it's funnier to have the poison come from the food basket. You just don't understand how humor works.

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