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This is the shit I'm talking about, man! Get that publishing bread!I've written another article and sent feelers out to see if that same guy is interested in publishing me again. Will post results here!
That's the idea man! @NarkyOtic deserves credit for helping me edit, we'll see how it goes though man.This is the shit I'm talking about, man! Get that publishing bread!
That's the idea man! @NarkyOtic deserves credit for helping me edit, we'll see how it goes though man.
Thanks for the reminder! Just finished cooking lunch for tomorrow. Will read through now ^_^
EDIT: LOL at your caption, you dork <3
I got rejected this time. The subject was pretty controversial to be honest (it was about steroid abuse in Brazilian jiu-jitsu), and I called out a couple of people. So I'm not deterred really, it was fun to write and I'm just going to move onto the next one.I've written another article and sent feelers out to see if that same guy is interested in publishing me again. Will post results here!
This is good stuff. Poems about the natural world are my shit.It's raining today, and I love it. I don't think this captured the feeling at all, but, here it is.
Cloud-clad hills
In the misted distance
Light of the whitened sky
Green expanse of fields
Embrace the gentle downpour-
Valley shrouded in rain.
This has a lovely, haiku-like meditative voice about it. Very calming :3It's raining today, and I love it. I don't think this captured the feeling at all, but, here it is.
Cloud-clad hills
In the misted distance
Light of the whitened sky
Green expanse of fields
Embrace the gentle downpour-
Valley shrouded in rain.
Sorry for the rejection, but good God. I don't know you that well, but imagining "Melon-crushing martial artists calls out other martial artists for steroid abuse" seems like a very Taek boss thing.The subject was pretty controversial to be honest (it was about steroid abuse in Brazilian jiu-jitsu), and I called out a couple of people.
Never gonna live the melon crushing downSorry for the rejection, but good God. I don't know you that well, but imagining "Melon-crushing martial artists calls out other martial artists for steroid abuse" seems like a very Taek boss thing.
It was too beautiful.Never gonna live the melon crushing down
APs greatest momentNever gonna live the melon crushing down
I got rejected this time. The subject was pretty controversial to be honest (it was about steroid abuse in Brazilian jiu-jitsu), and I called out a couple of people. So I'm not deterred really, it was fun to write and I'm just going to move onto the next one.
This has a lovely, haiku-like meditative voice about it. Very calming :3
I wanted to share another oldie, as I was flipping through my schools literary journal and remember loving this one (except for one line that needs to change. Line 4 just does not flow well to me anymore.)
It's a double unrhymed sonnet, and was an attempt to understand how, if I dont change it, my inherited depression will color how I handle my eventual death. It is not present in the poem, but it was meant to remind me to not be so negative, as the poem tonally dives down into some muck I surely never want to enter. The title is supposed to represent that as a choice. It is not a poem about questioning how I live my life, but rather, meditating on how I shall die, and how that should scare me into caring more for how I live. Shall I be poisoned with hemlock, or overjoyed with hollyhock?
As always, trigger warning, not a happy poem!
Hemlock or Hollyhock.
I.
Shall I call thee father, blasted Chronos?
Time, the old blighter, igniter of flesh,
Who laced heredity’s crown with Hemlock,
And stole the light from my callow visage.
Where once I walked through fields of hollyhock,
My feet tread now upon thorn and thistle,
Leaving in its wake the bloodstained footprints
My children’s children shall be forced to walk.
A loop of livestock to the butcher’s block,
Deafened ears keen on a distant grave’s song
Whose timeless melody whispers in turn:
“Soft shell of savage heart and bloodied feet,
Return to the sea of sleep, for death is
The noblesse oblige of humanity.”
II.
I am become ripe with mortality,
A bloated husk of the hours’ fell harvest,
Plucked from a branch I thought might pierce the sky.
Left to wither upon the forest floor,
My glassy eyes will return to the sand.
My bones will become porous and brittle,
Invisible worms will leave them hollow.
My skin shall soon mimic the spectre, its
Color spirited away by leeches,
And the teething wind will sink deep its fangs
Plucking out my hair like a fowl’s plumage.
A lissome monument carved for the dead,
I’ll be but a stone on nondescript earth
Above the pit where all sick men find rest.
Thank you!! Yeats, Byron, St. Vincent Millay, and Keats are my biggest influences, so I hope my poetry always carries at least a part of them.I can't tell you how much I love this! It's sublime. I am no expert in such things, but as a sonnet, it reminds me of John Keats "When I have Fears that I May Cease to Be," although you took a different approach to the subject.
I was told I could share my work in progress here, so...here it is.
Chapter 1
I was told I could share my work in progress here, so...here it is.
Chapter 1
I'm going to need to process this, but for now, let me just say that this is good eats.I wrote this a long time ago, while thinking about life, its shortness, and what it means. The last line I added without really understanding what it meant at the time, but it has become clear to me over the years- It is through others that you can truly see yourself.
my life
my life is a poem waiting to be written
it is a song that has yet to be sung
each action I make, a new line composed
every step on the path, another verse
i cannot change what is written
like the sky, i am-
composed of this spanned mortality
imprisoned-
but a moment until my release
yet a bound eternity
imperfect, i
always reaching- infinity unrealized
forever searching- knowledge unknown
and i- i create my reality
and you- you are my definition
I'd give you a like, if I couldI wrote this a long time ago, while thinking about life, its shortness, and what it means. The last line I added without really understanding what it meant at the time, but it has become clear to me over the years- It is through others that you can truly see yourself.
my life
my life is a poem waiting to be written
it is a song that has yet to be sung
each action I make, a new line composed
every step on the path, another verse
i cannot change what is written
like the sky, i am-
composed of this spanned mortality
imprisoned-
but a moment until my release
yet a bound eternity
imperfect, i
always reaching- infinity unrealized
forever searching- knowledge unknown
and i- i create my reality
and you- you are my definition