1. Don't you mean an AMV?
2. It's okay I guess. I kinda enjoyed looking back through the scenes of an anime series I enjoyed, and I kinda enjoyed the music, but there wasn't really anything special standing out with your contribution to this.
2'. The music doesn't quite seem to end, though, and I'm not really sure why you chose the scenes that you did, in the order that you put them.
3. Should probably mark it to say there are spoilers.
4. Why the picture-in-picture duplicate?
5. Should have left a break between the end of the music video portion and the outtro portion. As of right now, the music just jumps to the outtro music and the stark change sounds very odd.