Wow..this was bad.
There's nothing really even entertaining in this oneshot.
The HANDS on these characters. OH MY GOD. They look like rubber gloves! X_X
And I really couldn't focus on the "story" because of how terrible the art was. It was like the author just looked at the expressions an anime character can make and just pasted them on there. It was shallow and didn't "feel" at all. Plastic and below-average generic. The faces weren't even aligned on the head most of the time. This deserves 1 star all-around.