Damn, been awhile since I was on here. Hi.
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Finished page 2... would it be easier to bunch my comments together into one comment, so you only get one email? Or is it better for you this way?
And do you have anyone else seriously editing your work? I hope so. Ring them in now before your story gets longer... people will be intimidated by the length and not be as eager to pitch in. And, that way you get them hooked on your story and they can't wait for you to write the next few pages! HAHAHA!!! Psychology at work. *evil laugh*
Great, hope you are too.
Of course mate, I'd love to help out, but you're going to have to explain to this idiot how to open that kind of document first.
and I'm a bit late, but Happy New Year anyways!
YAY!! V2 is glorious!! Haha. I like the added changes you made. There are a few things that could be revised (which I'll get to later), but on a whole... I love it. Much better. :)
I need your email address again, so I can send you mine. Haha. Or if you have Skype, we could discuss revisions that way if you feel comfortable with that. It might be easier. Either way, let me know.
Also, have you reviewed your first chapter? You said that you felt your first one wasn't the best, so I'm wondering if you've read through it with the intention of editing yet.
Hiro, I'm sorry, first for replying late, second for not being able to, at least for the past few days, read your work. Hopefully I'll be able to look at it and give you some feedback in the next day or two, but realistically, no promises. It's nice to see that puriful is giving you feedback, though. :)
Okay, first page done. That's all for now. :)
Please let me know if you're finding these comments helpful and are seriously considering implementing at least a few of them. If not, I need to know, so I can go and do other stuff with my time... like watch anime!! Haha.
Also, can other people see my comments?? I hope not. Haha. I don't know if its possible for you to comment on the comment section and let me know your thoughts/clarifications. If you can't use it this way, then we can go by email. Although, I'll have to give you a different address. Let me know. :)