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Basically there's nothing wrong but in order for description to go up on the site this one would have to be reworded. I'm not a description mod, or a great writer so I can't break it down totally but just take a look at some of the other character descriptions we are already using. Click on FMA or something and read a description to get an idea. Also, there is more info on that in the above link about descriptions. I wanted to make sure you read the guideline first, before submitting since it saves us a ton of time and work :D plus you'll kind of understand what we are looking for in future submissions.
I will try to give a few pointers about that description:
"The male protagonist of Kimi no Iru Machi"- Never use the phrase "the protagonist" this is something that wikipedia does but we like it to be more personal plus we already know what anime he is in because he is attached to said anime. When someone looks at a character the name and their relation in that anime is displayed prominently to the right of their picture.
tsundere attitude towards" - be specific. a lot of people don't know what tsundere means believe it or not. How does he act specifically, as in what does he do?
"He is also very
prideful"- how so? what is he proud of?
"stubborn when it comes to
romance" - romance with whom?
Again, I am not a description mod but I've seen enough stuff come and go to know what they are looking for. Descriptions should avoid telling us plot and focus mainly on relationships with other characters and personality, which you did do just be more clear I'd say.
Please don't misunderstand me I'm not trying to be harsh with you believe me :D You're a better writer then I am :) We love community help and definitely want people to help fill in the database. We just have certain ways of doing things particularly in regard to how or descriptions read and image size requirements. I hope this stuff makes sense. Please read through that thread, get a forum account if you don't already have one, and resubmit the info. We can work through this stuff for sure and hopefully get your characters up in a timely fashion :D
you're going to need to read this ^ before adding content to the site. thanks a lot, and please feel free to re-submit data following our guidelines.