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Old 03-03-2010, 05:39 PM   #1
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Default Makoto ITOU - submitted by caitlin

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Description
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N/A

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Male lead of the School Days franchise, he has a crush on Kotonoha but grows into something of a playboy.

COPY CODE:
<p>Male lead of the School Days franchise, he has a crush on Kotonoha but grows into something of a playboy.</p>


Tags
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NEW:
High School Student, Pervert, Teenager


Names
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NEW:
Makoto ITOU (JP Name)


**URL_SLUG**
OLD: N/A
NEW: makoto-itou

**HAIR COLOR**
OLD: N/A
NEW: Black

**GENDER**
OLD: N/A
NEW: Male


Anime
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NEW:
School Days (Main), School Days: Magical Heart Kokoro-chan (Secondary), School Days: Valentine Days (Main)


Manga
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NEW:
School Days (Main)


Main Anime
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NEW:
School Days


Main Manga
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NEW:
School Days


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Old 03-03-2010, 05:54 PM   #2
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Default Re: Makoto ITOU - submitted by caitlin

The description could be longer, as of right now it's a bit short.
Check here for a complete guide: http://www.anime-planet.com/forum/sh...ad.php?t=32058
Try to focus on the character's personality. Phrases like "Male lead of the School Days franchise" should be avoided since he will already be marked as a main character.
If this thread is still in the main "Character Submission" thread, feel free to post a re-written description here.

Also, pictures should be screenshots, and 130x180 to 130x200 in size. You can use this site to crop your photo: mypictr - we make your profile picture

Thanks for the submission, as soon as a mod who has seen the show can verify it, the basic info can be added.
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Old 03-03-2010, 05:58 PM   #3
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Default Re: Makoto ITOU - submitted by caitlin

Yeah, I realised the mistakes a touch late, sorry! If you'd like I can give you the fixed description and image right here?
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Old 03-03-2010, 06:01 PM   #4
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Yes, please do! ^-^
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Old 03-03-2010, 06:03 PM   #5
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"Makoto Itou is an average high school student, a bit of a playboy at heart but well meaning. Witnessing the beautiful Kotonoha Katsura on the train he develops a crush on her, but is unable to make a move until energetic Sekai Saionji decides to help."

Unfortunately I can't think of much else to say as far as a description goes - the show is fairly slow and nothing remarkable is of note that wouldn't count as spoilers, IMO. Hopefully a mod who knows the show can think of more. :P

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Old 03-04-2010, 11:47 AM   #6
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Default Re: Makoto ITOU - submitted by caitlin

Added tag: shy
Removed tag: perverted

Removed reference to playboyism from description (it's crucial to the plot of School Days that he is NOT like that at the beginning). Generally fluffed the description out.
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Old 03-04-2010, 11:56 AM   #7
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Default Makoto ITOU - submitted by therik

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Edit Character


Names
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OLD:
Makoto ITOU (JP Name)

NEW:
Makoto ITOU (JP Name)


**URL_SLUG**
OLD: makoto-itou
NEW: makoto-itou

**HAIR COLOR**
OLD: Black
NEW: Black

**GENDER**
OLD: Male
NEW: Male


Anime
---------------------------------

OLD:
School Days (Main), School Days: Magical Heart Kokoro-chan (Secondary), School Days: Valentine Days (Main)

NEW:
School Days (Main), School Days: Magical Heart Kokoro-chan (Secondary), School Days: Valentine Days (Main)


Manga
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OLD:
School Days (Main)

NEW:
School Days (Main)


Main Anime
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OLD:
School Days

NEW:
School Days


Main Manga
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OLD:
School Days

NEW:
School Days


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Old 03-04-2010, 11:57 AM   #8
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Default Makoto ITOU - submitted by therik

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Edit Character


Names
---------------------------------

OLD:
Makoto ITOU (JP Name)

NEW:
Makoto ITOU (JP Name)


**URL_SLUG**
OLD: makoto-itou
NEW: makoto-itou

**HAIR COLOR**
OLD: Black
NEW: Black

**GENDER**
OLD: Male
NEW: Male


Anime
---------------------------------

OLD:
School Days (Main), School Days: Magical Heart Kokoro-chan (Secondary), School Days: Valentine Days (Main)

NEW:
School Days (Main), School Days: Magical Heart Kokoro-chan (Secondary), School Days: Valentine Days (Main)


Manga
---------------------------------

OLD:
School Days (Main)

NEW:
School Days (Main)


Main Anime
---------------------------------

OLD:
School Days

NEW:
School Days


Main Manga
---------------------------------

OLD:
School Days

NEW:
School Days


Attached Images
File Type: jpg 5122-makoto-itou-new_image.jpg (7.6 KB, 2 views)
File Type: jpg 5122-makoto-itou-old_image.jpg (0, 2 views)
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