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12-31-2010, 06:44 PM
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MY DNA IS MADE UP OF ANIME
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[descrip] Saruno AMAKUMI (Mr. Fullswing) - submitted by Thrawn
SUBMITTED BY: Thrawn
Comments --------------------------------- <p>Hesitant to add perverted to tags, even though he was peeping in the girls changeroom at the start of the manga. As well as mischievous, even though he provides most of the gags in the manga. Doesn't seem like it would fit so I left it out.</p> <p>The description definitely needs work; sounds both like a description of the manga and Saruno.</p> Description --------------------------------- OLD: N/A NEW: <p>All the girls he's liked prior to high school were taken away from him by athletes. Continuing the "tradition" in high school, he decides to join a club (A sports one, as girls love athletes) but after meeting Torii Nagi, manager of the baseball club, he decides to join the club, no matter what it takes. With his lack of baseball training and knowledge, he relies on pure strength and the power of his Fullswing.</p> COPY CODE: <p>All the girls he's liked prior to high school were taken away from him by athletes. Continuing the "tradition" in high school, he decides to join a club (A sports one, as girls love athletes) but after meeting Torii Nagi, manager of the baseball club, he decides to join the club, no matter what it takes. With his lack of baseball training and knowledge, he relies on pure strength and the power of his Fullswing.</p> Tags --------------------------------- NEW: Athlete, High School Student, Teenager Names --------------------------------- NEW: Mr. Fullswing (Nickname), Saruno AMAKUMI (JP Name) **URL_SLUG** OLD: N/A NEW: saruno-amakumi **HAIR COLOR** OLD: N/A NEW: Brown **GENDER** OLD: N/A NEW: Male Manga --------------------------------- NEW: Mr. Fullswing (Main) Main Manga --------------------------------- NEW: Mr. Fullswing |
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12-31-2010, 06:47 PM
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MY DNA IS MADE UP OF ANIME
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Re: Saruno AMAKUMI (Mr. Fullswing) - submitted by Thrawn
cool!
yeah in general, with tags if you are in doubt it's best to just leave them out. thanks for the help Thrawn. Hopefully one of the d-mods can get to this in a timely fashion :D |
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01-01-2011, 01:33 AM
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Re: [descrip] Saruno AMAKUMI (Mr. Fullswing) - submitted by Thrawn
No problem :) Thinking of getting back into this manga and events led to me starting this up.
Good luck on that! Less than 50 have a status on it, excluding want to read.
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01-01-2011, 02:12 AM
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Re: [descrip] Saruno AMAKUMI (Mr. Fullswing) - submitted by Thrawn
It seems a bit plot-y. Can you add a bit more about his personality? (Here in the thread is fine, instead of re-submitting).
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01-02-2011, 08:51 PM
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Re: [descrip] Saruno AMAKUMI (Mr. Fullswing) - submitted by Thrawn
Hmm... I want to include something about the gags and him constantly doing them, but I don't know how to add it to the description.
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