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Narumon Z
Join Date: Aug 2012
Location: Dreamland
Posts: 75
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![]() Welcome to my gallery! Well I've been gfxing for a month now so i thought i'd better make a gallery to help me improve.
And now for my most recent works:
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MY DNA IS MADE UP OF ANIME
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I can give artistic criticism but not so much technical >.<
I'm a huge fan of the 'new day' one. what did you use for the ripple effect? I think # the |
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Narumon Z
Join Date: Aug 2012
Location: Dreamland
Posts: 75
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Thanks for the CnC ^.^
#2- Ripple effect? I'm not sure what you mean :3 #4- I see, I tried adding some C4Ds but they didn't work out too well. I'll look at it again later. #5- Okay. I agree about the border and brightness.
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MY DNA IS MADE UP OF ANIME
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Wonderland Woods
Age: 26
Posts: 3,273
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Really nice sigs. I like the 2nd one the most.
I think that those little squares on the 1st one are kinda distracting from the focal point. Maybe if you removed the 'walk in eternal sunshine' text and put the squares in that place it'd look better (but that's just my opinion) |
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both very stunning efforts. the perspective in the top one is astounding. amazing work with the feathers.
the second one looks a bit flat just in direct comparison, partly because the shadows look a little bit funny at this angle. her pose and the perspective imply she is bending down and we are looking up at her, in which case the lighting just doesn't seem to make sense. how are the shadows on the left side of her hair cast, and where is the light source in the same area? I still prefer it, though, because I like the character design and colour palette better, and because I'm not the biggest fan of the background in the top one. |
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