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[Hevn]

a few steps further.. (it's almost spam XD)

[Kumori]

THATS FRIGGIN AWESOME! Is that a pic or a painting??? Maybe you should have it to where the lines are less visible on the upper lip. (just a suggestion though)

[Hevn]

Originally Posted by Kumori

THATS FRIGGIN AWESOME! Is that a pic or a painting??? Maybe you should have it to where the lines are less visible on the upper lip. (just a suggestion though)

Don't really understand wich lines you mean.. Im guessing the darker linkes on the top of her upper lip (white part) but that's because the paint on her face isn't in the "cracks" of her lips.. (forgive me for my english XD)...
if you don't mean that.. :P than Im gonna look at it again tommorow.. got still a lot of work to do so ^^..

(ps. its a digital drawing.. I have a print next to me to look at it..) ^^

[captaincrunch]

Great work Hevn. Is that for fun or for a project?

[Hevn]

Originally Posted by captaincrunch

Great work Hevn. Is that for fun or for a project?

fun.. Im working on it when I've got some free time on my intership.. that's why it's taking so long XD..
but it's interesting to see where I started, and my final result (wich should be done in a few days I hope) ^^

[captaincrunch]

Work in progress...

Ruffles are hard to draw :(

Update:
this took forever to draw.

[keitaro2]

Originally Posted by captaincrunch

Work in progress...

Ruffles are hard to draw :(

Update:
this took forever to draw.

wow u are quite the talented Artist.

[captaincrunch]

Here's something I drew with a ballpoint today. Shiro from Deadman Wonderland.

Too bad you can't erase a pen. I was kinda screwed when I started adding hair strands :)

... also, crooked drawing is crooked.

[xxstryderxx]

i know its been a while. i took a break. maybe yall forgot about me. but this is literally the only spot on AP that i put my work, otherwise i would have had TONS of topics like capt suggested in the beggining.

but it didnt seem like i got much feed back, and artist know where im coming from. i spend time on these so let me know what you think. good bad or whatever im open minded. otherwise its quite pointless to post them. and i will try to give more feed back as well.

basically follwing the theme of the male i made earlier. will color n effect SOON soon.

FEEDBACK: i have read back to my most recent post. very good work by everyone.

captain- your latest is very good. pen makes you feel all pro inside. and its tough to work with :'(. for the one before that. i can see your colors will be fine (as always) so the finishes will look balanced. my cons are line work (which is bout pointless at this stage :"C) her jaw seems strong IMO (bold or points? i know its anime). and i think the ruffles on the arm are PERFECT, you should apply the same process and just think of her waist. compare the first layers on both of them. the skirt would poof out like the bands. GREAT work and im looking forward to the finished. and post in earlier stages, i feel like a dick giving linear suggestions after your coloring XC.

Hevn- im loving the realsim. and appreciate the plain study of it. i havent seen much of your work so its hard to say what id suggest. the skill in it is def great. you and capt both have talent for days. ima sit back on this one. lighting and dimension are key here for sure, but from seeing the steps youve takien, its kinda obv your working that way. i cant say much here but good job and IM WATCHING YOU, lmfao i wanna see this end result.

NISSAN 350Z- When you added color this picture just took a huge leap forward. it looks great. ill state again you pick the most interesting scenes. and i admire how your tackling backgrounds from the begining, as its still a skill i need in my aresonal. your coloring is actually very good, so focus on line work. ive got tons of youtube vids for different areas and will suggest them at a moments notice. keep up the good work. i can tell your a quick learner from the progress youve shown, so i feel its more "study" first, then practice. cuz you seem to take experience a long ways fast.

sorry for the book but it has been a while. :-) keep that shit coming, and if i didnt leave feedback its not that its bad i just wanna see more activity. talk, ask, DEMAND. i dont wanna say stuff if im not sure your listening....

ALSO i hate leaving feedback on pieces that sold or are for sale. anything you make from scratch and make money off is a good business move, and i see these as that. always a good job. so i wont say anything on "professional" work unless asked.

[captaincrunch]

Well that's great xxstryderxx. Welcome back. FWIW, I think you have to explicitly ask for help if you want critiques, otherwise this it's more or less just an "oh I see" type deal.

Thanks for the tips on mine. If I ever get around to it, I think I'll try and vectorize the linework to clean it up, and I'll be able to tweak the skirt a bit. The face is a pretty faithful representation of the character, which is why it looks so bold/etc.

Transforming rasterized linework in PS causes blurring, which if you sharpen later, you get those ugly jagged/inconsistent lines. I guess I should just start working with bigger images. :)

FWIW, I mostly draw as practice, so I'm never too worried about finishing/polishing anything if I think I've gotten a fair amount of experience from it. I usually just move onto something new.


As to your image, it looks good but the proportions are a bit off. The shoulders are a little broad (or are those puffs in the shirt?) and the head is too narrow. The hands may be a little big/long as well.
I think those images (and the one you did earlier) would look best with thicker, softer grey lines like a sketch.

Here's an early stage/rough sketch I wouldn't mind some feedback on. I'm not happy with the hairstyle, so it will likely change. Does it look proportionally correct? I was aiming for a bit of perspective.