Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders - Anime-Planet forum

krono · 08-17-2008, 11:23 AM

Ok, i posted this pic for 2 reasons:

1- I'd like ur opinions (duh)
2- I'm not top notch when it comes photoshop, so if u have any suggestions, pointers or ideas, i'd really appreciate them!

Arigato'yo! Hope u like it.

Thanks again sesetsu!

http://i520.photobucket.com/albums/w...orangecopy.jpg

Sesetsu · 08-17-2008, 01:06 PM

Looks pretty good but try and use a darker background color and place some kind of lighting and it would look great. Also try placing a little bit of color other then the orange in not much but just a little helps to draw the viewers attention to a certain area and such. Try placing another render over the orange one with a low opacity and maybe color dodge or the such. But overall its a good job the placement of the fractal renders are good and and the whole image seems to flow nicely the little bit of color that I mentioned will help draw the viewer to the focal point of your work but keep up the good work you'll get better.

shunt-the-pirat · 08-18-2008, 01:36 PM

i looks good but the color is a little washed out, it needs a bit more definition maybe somthing like this: ImageShack - Hosting :: kronohr1.jpg
i did that with playing with the levels,curves and saturation a bit

who is it btw?

krono · 08-19-2008, 05:46 AM

maybe cuz i used neon glow.
well i duuno the girl in the pic to be honest, try asking sesetsu...?

scythelord50 · 08-28-2008, 10:29 AM

Honestly I think it's really well done. I think that the lighter background was the smarter idea. Having to dark a background would( in my opinion ) ruin the over all feel.

arc666 · 08-30-2008, 12:12 PM

Quote:

who is it btw?

Looks like cassandra from soul calibur 2/3 and soul edge.

Oehr · 08-30-2008, 12:18 PM

the lines around her arent smooth. maybe you should do something about that.
everything else looks good to me :)

krono · 09-07-2008, 05:17 AM

Thanks scythelord50, Oehr :)
as for the lines around her, the image was a solid render with no background, so i'm not sure how to modify the lines (since i didn't extract/crop the image), any ideas?

scythelord50 · 09-07-2008, 02:16 PM

You can do either one or both of my suggestions. First sharpening tool. Second leave it be and tell everyone else to screw off.

Elindil · 09-07-2008, 06:36 PM

sharpening it wont help if anything it will make it look worse >.> it seems that a small amout of her is missing in places like the one arm if that wasnt there it would be much easier to fix

08-17-2008, 11:23 AM	#1 (permalink)
krono Narumon Z Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 22	Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders Ok, i posted this pic for 2 reasons: 1- I'd like ur opinions (duh) 2- I'm not top notch when it comes photoshop, so if u have any suggestions, pointers or ideas, i'd really appreciate them! Arigato'yo! Hope u like it. Thanks again sesetsu! http://i520.photobucket.com/albums/w...orangecopy.jpg __________________ Time for you to say goodbye... Time for the light to escape your eye... Time for you to utter your final cry... Time for you...to Die.

08-17-2008, 01:06 PM	#2 (permalink)
Sesetsu Anime Fan in Training Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Tristate, NY Posts: 362	Re: Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders Looks pretty good but try and use a darker background color and place some kind of lighting and it would look great. Also try placing a little bit of color other then the orange in not much but just a little helps to draw the viewers attention to a certain area and such. Try placing another render over the orange one with a low opacity and maybe color dodge or the such. But overall its a good job the placement of the fractal renders are good and and the whole image seems to flow nicely the little bit of color that I mentioned will help draw the viewer to the focal point of your work but keep up the good work you'll get better. __________________ "Why? why did you do this you promised me you wouldn't die!" -Ciel

08-18-2008, 01:36 PM	#3 (permalink)
shunt-the-pirat Narumon Z Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 49	Re: Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders i looks good but the color is a little washed out, it needs a bit more definition maybe somthing like this: ImageShack - Hosting :: kronohr1.jpg i did that with playing with the levels,curves and saturation a bit who is it btw?

08-19-2008, 05:46 AM	#4 (permalink)
krono Narumon Z Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 22	Re: Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders maybe cuz i used neon glow. well i duuno the girl in the pic to be honest, try asking sesetsu...? __________________ Time for you to say goodbye... Time for the light to escape your eye... Time for you to utter your final cry... Time for you...to Die.

08-28-2008, 10:29 AM	#5 (permalink)
scythelord50 Anime Fan in Training Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 107	Re: Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders Honestly I think it's really well done. I think that the lighter background was the smarter idea. Having to dark a background would( in my opinion ) ruin the over all feel. __________________ Click siggy to view my signatures.

08-30-2008, 12:18 PM	#7 (permalink)
Oehr MY DNA IS MADE UP OF ANIME Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Germany Age: 17 Posts: 3,050	Re: Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders the lines around her arent smooth. maybe you should do something about that. everything else looks good to me :) __________________ ALL HAIL HATE, T h e A n t i -C l u b. My avatar does not represent my personality!

09-07-2008, 05:17 AM	#8 (permalink)
krono Narumon Z Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 22	Re: Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders Thanks scythelord50, Oehr :) as for the lines around her, the image was a solid render with no background, so i'm not sure how to modify the lines (since i didn't extract/crop the image), any ideas? __________________ Time for you to say goodbye... Time for the light to escape your eye... Time for you to utter your final cry... Time for you...to Die.

09-07-2008, 02:16 PM	#9 (permalink)
scythelord50 Anime Fan in Training Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 107	Re: Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders You can do either one or both of my suggestions. First sharpening tool. Second leave it be and tell everyone else to screw off. __________________ Click siggy to view my signatures.

09-07-2008, 06:36 PM	#10 (permalink)
Elindil Otaku Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: A colorful land full of my friends the Chiropterans o.0 Age: 21 Posts: 1,721	Re: Tryin' out one of Sesetsu's renders sharpening it wont help if anything it will make it look worse >.> it seems that a small amout of her is missing in places like the one arm if that wasnt there it would be much easier to fix __________________ my latest project update 5

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